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yama arashi by muura

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Your artworks always have such a unique style to them! The lines and forms are really expressive and have a strong sense of movement to them, which is something I always found difficult to achieve. I also really like the composition, this particular arrangement I've never seen anyone else use before!

I think something that could improve the image would be more detail in the creatures above the panda and penguin (sorry, I don't watch the series, so dunno what they're called), and to a lesser degree on the panda and penguin. In particular, it would be nice to see some tonal variation in the colours, so that we can see the texture of the fur (i think sara stone incorporates this sort of detail into otherwise flat planes of colour really well -- [link] ). This would also help to emphasise the focal points in the picture.

Anyway, this is really cool!
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muura Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013  Professional General Artist
Thank you so much for taking the time to critique me, I appreciate it very much <3
Ahh man if I just got around actually picking up my tablet when I digitalize my drawings but I've turned really lazy and just used the mouse for colouring lately?? It's not the way to go! I have to get myself going and try to push every piece just a.. little higher. Thank you! I see what you mean with the sample too.

(The name of the panda and penguin in the show... are Panda and Penguin..)
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